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Edit: The speech bubbles have been made less shitty. Plus the tint has been fixed.

Guh. Three pages. Two dead pens. One if you consider that one exploded for no reason while it was still brand new. I know the speech bubbles suck ass. I'm working on it.

The ugly tint is my scanner's fault. It's a piece of shyt and I hate it. I'll fix it when I've got the chance. (Not in class.)

Fonts:
Mistral (Mother Mass)
Tall Paul (Parasite + host body)
First Order (Souls of the host body) - can be found at dafont.com -

If any of these are difficult to read, please tell me so I can change it.

I was more or less told that general free reign was available for intrepretation of the various things that are not Maunstrou. Therefore, the Mother Mass has a gigantic face with which to freak you all. May it inspire you to draw something disturbing and / or mildly weird in the very near future.

The two whispy figures towards the end are the trapped souls of the host body (remember it's crafted from two people). If any of the contestants or FH staff want a ref for these characters for whatever reason tell me now while I still have actual time to make one. Might try to make this better before Friday. I can't tell if it's completely comprehensible at the moment, I'm just too tired.

Anyway, it's three in the morning, I feel like total crap, and I'm going to bed. Good night.

PS. - the spread that I apparently need is forthcoming, I'm just trying to figure out just what to do with it.

Any pointers, constructive crit and whatnot are more than welcome. I'd appreciate any advice on comicking anyone would be willing to share.

Entries so far:
Audition: --->
Character ref: --->
Mission 01: Here
Spread 01: --->
Mission 02: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5
Mission 03: 1, 2, 3
Mission 04: 1, 2 (done by ~Ak4tsuki)
Mission 05: 1a (done by ~Ak4tsuki), 1b, 2, 2 alternate (done by ~Ak4tsuki)
Mission 06: 1

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Damnit Nigga. I wanted to get this weeks early bird prize B:.

Awesome inking like before, I love the dramatic pacing and paneling. The monsters and scenery look are well portrayed and rendered. It will be no surprise that you score high this round c8

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From the midst of the radiant light, the intrinsic sound of Truth will resound like the rumble of a thousand thunderclaps. Do not fear it! Do not try to flee!-The Tibetan Book of the Dead
Thank you, that means a lot! The inking was a nightmare. I wanted to try doing it on the computer, but it turned out very badly, unfortunately...

I'm glad the pacing works! Does the lettering flow relatively well? I'm worried it's disjointed.

Good luck with your entry! I'll be looking forward to it!

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"I collect spores, moulds and fungus." -Egon Spengler, Ghostbusters

"And God said, let there be Spam, and let my children taste this Spam, and vow never to do so again." -a comedian I don't remember the name of.
:XD: Sweet... I'm finally starting to understand how the parisite ties in to other things... the demon upper half is the chef, right? The one that was captured?

Very cool work; your comic pages always flow so well...

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They say artists should be able to create no matter what medium they are handed. But if someone hands you a slab of marble, and tells you to carve a sculpture using only your face, you're probably S.O.L.
Wow this is great, definitely loving Mother Mass! All of your work is so detailed it's insane *explodes*

This will totally be helpful with portraying Maunstrau in the story.
Holy shite.
The sky is screwed.

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Eternal Struggle. [link]
That's right! The Angel is the lower half. There's a shade differentiation between them, but that'll come through in the colour ref that I think I'll be able to finish.

Thank you! I was worried about the flow, especially with the dialogue. I'm hoping it's fairly comprehensible.

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"I collect spores, moulds and fungus." -Egon Spengler, Ghostbusters

"And God said, let there be Spam, and let my children taste this Spam, and vow never to do so again." -a comedian I don't remember the name of.
So much ink... it BURNS! I'm going to kill all my pens by the time this is done, I just know it.

I'm eager to see what you do with it in your story!

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"I collect spores, moulds and fungus." -Egon Spengler, Ghostbusters

"And God said, let there be Spam, and let my children taste this Spam, and vow never to do so again." -a comedian I don't remember the name of.
What sky?

Nothing but spherical things as far as the eye can see... the earth is DOOMED! Run away!

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"I collect spores, moulds and fungus." -Egon Spengler, Ghostbusters

"And God said, let there be Spam, and let my children taste this Spam, and vow never to do so again." -a comedian I don't remember the name of.
Aint it awesome?

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Eternal Struggle. [link]

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